i think the composition and placement of the subject in the first photo is interesting. it's an interesting way to look at something ordinary. in the black and white one, i like the subject matter, but i wish there was more contrast in different values of the greys.
Complementary; Nice composition, nice focal point of the pentagon top, the silver on the left is a little overbearing. nice natural complementary colors
B&W: i feel the blacks and white both to be pushed a little farther for more contrast, to make a stronger photo
I like the top one, it has great contrasting colors, the bottom one could use more contrast and maybe a more interesting composition. The fact that her head is cropped out makes my eyes drawn to her shirt for some reason
I love the composition and unconventional angle of your top photo but I agree with the previous comments on your black and white photo. It's a decent image but would be better with a stronger contrast.
I like the color one and the emphasis on the red using a more dulled off green. The black and white one, as has been stated, needs more contrast between some areas. I also wish her poor head wasn't cut off.
Your color photo really stands out and the placement is nice. I agree with everyone else that more contrast would be nice. Cutting or cropping a body part off (such as the head) gives it less emphasis an importance and as a result, draws the eyes elsewhere (in this case, to the shirt).
I really like the colors used in the first one. nice example of analogous color scheme. The second one could be compositionally improved i think. my eye doesnt really know where to go
i think the composition and placement of the subject in the first photo is interesting. it's an interesting way to look at something ordinary. in the black and white one, i like the subject matter, but i wish there was more contrast in different values of the greys.
ReplyDeleteComplementary; Nice composition, nice focal point of the pentagon top, the silver on the left is a little overbearing. nice natural complementary colors
ReplyDeleteB&W: i feel the blacks and white both to be pushed a little farther for more contrast, to make a stronger photo
I like the top one, it has great contrasting colors, the bottom one could use more contrast and maybe a more interesting composition. The fact that her head is cropped out makes my eyes drawn to her shirt for some reason
ReplyDeleteI love the composition and unconventional angle of your top photo but I agree with the previous comments on your black and white photo. It's a decent image but would be better with a stronger contrast.
ReplyDeleteI like the color one and the emphasis on the red using a more dulled off green. The black and white one, as has been stated, needs more contrast between some areas. I also wish her poor head wasn't cut off.
ReplyDeleteYour color photo really stands out and the placement is nice. I agree with everyone else that more contrast would be nice. Cutting or cropping a body part off (such as the head) gives it less emphasis an importance and as a result, draws the eyes elsewhere (in this case, to the shirt).
ReplyDeleteGood chroma on the first. I don't know where to focus my eye though.
ReplyDeleteI really like the colors used in the first one. nice example of analogous color scheme. The second one could be compositionally improved i think. my eye doesnt really know where to go
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